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My Mistake |
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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
My Mistake Before you leave Please let me explain It was hard for me to believe That I had no more to gain You looked at me differently Ever since that day You felt I was no longer trustworthy What could I say? I didn't have the will To make things right I didn't know what to feel I'm trying to forget that night But it keeps replaying Over and over in my mind I keep delaying But another love I was forced to find |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
I really liked ur poem! you expressed how you feel really well and i know it must have been hard for you to go through that.  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Great job!! Keep dat chin high. ~Carly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You're never FORCED to find a love. just something i've learned along the way  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This sounds like a hard thing to be going through. As Curly said, you expressed these emotions very well, good job on the poem. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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