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Misty Blue Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44 |
"Truthful emotions I'm goin through right now" ~Innocent~ To see you looking at me Was something I'd never before seen To watch you watching me Came as a surprise or so it seemed You spoke the sweetest words That somehow seemed untrue My feelings were unheard What could I do? You finally asked how I felt About the circumstances we were in Your voice made me melt I didn't know where to begin I figured out a way to show you what I felt inside An innocent little kiss Is what started this time of something we couldn't hide |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
THIS WAS SOOOO SWEET! i'm so glad that you have someone in ur life to share things with. i hope it works out ok!  Curlu "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a really sweet poem. Innocent stuff can lead to naughty stuff though hehe. BUT ANYWAY....i wouldn't know anything about that..... great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a great job on this poem, I like it I really like how you worded this, it's just nice..."I figured out a way to show you what I felt inside An innocent little kiss" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
whoa...can i relate to this poem!! The same exact thing happened to me...and i was thinking about it today, pretty cool that you wrote this. i liked it a lot and i know how you feel!! I figured out a way to show you what I felt inside An innocent little kiss Is what started this time of something we couldn't hide |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Great poem, it had some really great lines in it that just jumped out at me. I really liked this one. Keoni |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was beautiful!! I loved it! It really reminds me of someone special to me. Well great work, keep writing!! Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
This was sooooo great! I hope you showed it to whoever it was about! Very sweet! Thanx for sharing it! ~Kristin ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What a great example of being speechless. This is very sweet. So, how'd everything go after?  thanks for sharingI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awww this was really sweet...Im glad that you shared it with us...Keep up the good work!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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