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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2000-11-07 07:05 AM


I wanted to extend a verse,
To each of you in kind,
I'd like to make it grow and grow ...
Please answer each in rhyme!

***

What Would I Choose

I follow all your poetry,
And see your hopes and dreams,
Just like I wrote when I was young,
And living through my teens.

You bring to mind, such memories,
Of twenty years ago,
It sets my mind to pondering,
The things in life I've known.

If I could turn back hands of time,
I wonder what I'd choose,
What occupation, I'd have picked,
If I'd had none to lose.

I pumped gas at a station,
And I worked a factory,
I cleaned pools for a summer,
Mopped up floors upon my knees.

I schooled myself in nursing,
Till a car crash dashed that dream,
And had to re-think everything
Change goals in life mid-stream.

The counselor said my job stats showed
An artsy kind of mind,
But steered me into office work,
'Tis where I've been resigned.

I run a corporation now,
(So I should not complain),
But still my artsy mind sneaks in,
And dreams like this, remain.

*I'd love to write for Hallmark,
*Paint a scene in Paris, France,
*I'd love to glide across the room,
*In competition dance.

And so, I'm asking each of you,
Forget all barriers,
If you could choose just what you want,
What goal in life you'd share?

/Kit McCallum



[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 11-07-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-11-07 09:10 AM


If I had a hand in my future life
I’d say “No College for me!”
I would write or act for my daily meal
I’d be what I want to be

But expectations are set on me now
And I have no choice
My parents say “Med school, and nothing less”
To them, I have no voice

Considering my love for animals
I’m going to be a Vet
A type of Med school, my parents say
And they sit with their thoughts, content

In a perfect world, you see
We could be what we want to be…
Until then, I’ll work without a fight
But they can’t stop me from writing at night



False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-11-07 03:36 PM


To have this chance to be
Anything in my dreams, lets see,
Maybe a poet with no restrictions,
Or a political analyst with all the predictions,

No wait a minute I have a thought!
I'll be a thief and never get caught,
Wait that's not right, that would be bad,
I think I'll pick a job I've never I had!

I'd like to shape the public's views,
Get a few "Ahhhhh's" and even some "eewww's",
Yes I think I know what I will be,
A journalist bringing stories to you from me.

(And no, I really don't steal, if you caught that)

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

http://www.thehungersite.com

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-07 03:44 PM


And now a non career one if you don't mind...

I'd like to help out in any way,
Giving back without earning pay,
Volunteering to make the world succeed,
Trying to change by taking the lead,

Giving time to make this a better place,
A comforting spot for the whole human race,
This world should be full of people who care,
Making sure everyone's fine by just being there.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

http://www.thehungersite.com

Alwye
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4 posted 2000-11-07 09:57 PM


What are the dreams that live deep within
And possess the chambers of my heart?
Well there are quite a few you see,
And here is where I'll start!

I want to teach the children
And spread knowledge through the world
I want to raise a family
And watch my doubts become unfurled.

I wish to write poetry
In some reclusive, quiet place
I need to try and change the world
Even by adding a smile to someone's face.

I have to be the soul inside
Who's casting reverie to the stars
And make my mark on everyone
who has touched me-near or far.  


*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller


luvnkris
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Posts 144
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5 posted 2000-11-08 05:30 AM



When i think about my life
What i want it to be
The first that springs to mind
Is visions of my boy and me

Together forever and happy still
With a great loving family and
Looking forward to eternity
Where we'll always remain hand in hand

I'd also like to care for others
Those with troubles and hurts
Show them that I love and care
For they deserve no hurts

Another thing i'd like to achieve
Is to finish school and my TEE
I'd like to go to uni and study hard
To become the vet, thats for me

But if none of this happens
It'll be ok still
As long as i have my God
Then i also have my will.

Luv Jo
xoxoxo




* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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6 posted 2000-11-08 06:42 AM


My goal in life,
Was once shattered,
I was told it would never happen,
I look today and see that ive done it,
Ya i made my highschool wrestling team,
I showed them, im the only freshman on the varsity team,

My goal in life is to actually go somewhere in life with my poetry and im trying to find ways to publish some of them.

If in life i dont succede then i will move on and try in other fields.

Thanks Kit i enjoy you letting us express where we want to be in a few years  )

"put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever"



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7 posted 2000-11-09 03:38 PM


I guess eveyone else would choose to be nothing   ~bump~

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

http://www.thehungersite.com

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