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Opposite Rebirth |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Opposite Rebirth: Glitter filled cups of yester year. The life that was untold. A glass half empty, yet half full. God's wrath and Satan's mold. A crusting face of deadly fear Spawned upon this woeful earth. It's a smile upon ones own soul In living a rebirth.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i just see so much energy coming out of this one, like i dont know. i loved it and the selection of words. great dopey San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, yeah, wow, .....and stuff. I just can't find the words for this. So you get the "great job", but I really mean great job. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
great poem dopey! you've got great style which never goes wrong as a poet!  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
So few words, yet sooo powerful! I admire that...it takes a real talent to say so much in such a small amount of space! Another great one dopey!  Much love Kris ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~All that I have found in reason is reason just to not believe.~ |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey, hey this was an interesting poem! C-ya! Love ya! Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Bam. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'm glad you all liked the style in this one. Hehehe and a lot of you said it was "interesting".....too many people say that about my poetry and do not elaborate on what they meen....oh well. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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