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Dear Friend
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Dear Friend |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
I wrote this a few months ago, and I' ve just now finally found someone to dedicate to. This is for my Boy-Friend, who is also my Best-Friend.  Dear Friend I am glad we have met Just when you think your world is coming to an end Someone always seems to come along whom you let Usually come into your life These types of people will always stay in your heart They always seem to make you forget about that knife They are able to take out that painful dart That other people cause you to feel Because they are too scared to feel the pain They are too scared to just deal Deal with that hot blood running through each and every vein The new being that comes in The one who distracts your mind Usually won’t cause any sin They are the ones who will never be blind They will always try to understand what is wandering around in your head These are the people who won’t judge you for everything that you have been through These people come in your life for a reason, to waken you and keep you from feeling dead Day after day, when the time has come you will both realize that you grew The friendship you both will share The friendship that keeps you feeling alive in inside Will always be there Those kind of friends will never push you aside Just remember this one thing: That a friend will always stay a friend Whether or not you feel the friendship or relationship is about to end June 8, 2000 1:18 P.M. (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is really cool, nicely done "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey, this was great. I liked the way you worded a lot of the lines. It's great that you've found someone to fit this poem! ~Carly |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good one...Its good to hear that you have someone to dedicate this poem too!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
great dedicaation!! very nicely done. it's good to have a bond as strong as the one you decribed. great job!< !signature--> "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" [This message has been edited by Slim (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful tribute and a great read.  |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Thanks again everyone, I really appreciate it!!! (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
what a nice thing to say about a friend/boy friend at that. thanks for sharing. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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