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Time (repost) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Time... The time has come for us, to say our final good~byes. So wipe away the tears, and dry your eyes. Time gave us love, but then took it away. And all that is left, is the good~bye you must say. Only time could tell, when the day would come. Turing this lover's melody, into just a friends rhythm. Give it some time, and I promise your heart will heal. But I cannot force myself, to change the way I feel. ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Wow! I really liked this one. It made so much sense. Good Job! (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love this stanza, it just seems so true. The whole poem is very good, I like it. Thanks for reposting it for us  "Give it some time, and I promise your heart will heal. But I cannot force myself, to change the way I feel." "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Sorry about the two posts, but I wanted to add this to my private Library "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Stephanya~Thanks for the compliment and for reading it!!! Lakewalker~Thanks for reading it...Thats ok about the 2 posts... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely thoughts Erin ... goodbyes are so difficult, very nicely written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
great poem.. and how true it is that good-bye's are often hard. but feelings are better off recognized than ignored. nicely done!< !signature--> "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" [This message has been edited by Slim (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thank you Kit and Slim for your replies...Thanks for taking the time out to read it...Good~byes for me are the worst for some reason... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*squints his eyes*....almost 2am...and im tired as hell. Great poem though, kinda woke me up a bit!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey cheese cake  --- hope you didn't bring this poem back up cause it's actually happening in your life right now. Is it?"The time has come for us, to say our final good~byes. So wipe away the tears, and dry your eyes." i love this line I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~Well Im glad that my poem woke you up...LOL Thanks for reading it... Acire~If anything like this was going on in my life you know that I would talk to you about it...But its not...Its just that I felt like having a poem posted...But soon there will be some new ones from me...I just havent been in the mood to write lately... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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