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liqwidnik
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0 posted 2000-11-05 11:14 PM


******These are just a few thoughts that were in my head don't get it it's me.*******

midnight sky
feelin high

stars at night
feel just right

purple passions
alarm the world

rainbows of the world
colors abound

on the ground
in the sky

mindlessly falling
crazily sane

Feeling



"We can not truely love someone with whom we never laugh"- Agnes Repplier

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1 posted 2000-11-06 01:18 AM


This is just fine. I liked it....a bit of a free flow feeling and i like that about it.
Wonderful!



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Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-11-06 02:41 PM


Yeah, I like it, these are some interesting thoughts.  Good job   These two words just caught my attention  "crazily sane", I love it

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3 posted 2000-11-06 07:08 PM


I liked this one...free style is a nice change  to rhyming and stuff over flowing with meaning and passion. It had a light sense of meaning to it..i liked it!!
Slim
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4 posted 2000-11-06 09:59 PM


i really liked this. it flows good. i could think about it with many different meanings. nice job!

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5 posted 2000-11-10 01:50 PM


honestly, I'd like you to help me understand the poem.  I've read it a couple times already and i don't want to misread it.  So, if you please, help me a bit I'd appreciate it

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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