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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
curlygurly: I know what your feel with the cancer deal as well, my aunt died from cancer, my mom's friend died as well, and everytime i turn around people are dying left and right, so here's a poem right off the tope for cancer ~My Poem For my AunT~ Seeing you all my life Knowing you were watching my every move Trying to over protect me in everything i do Then one day i came home and heard you were sick Just thinking it was a regular cold I just ignored it Not knowing how serious it was We talked for months And you were doing alright Then my mom told me you were getting worse I wanted to talk to you But the tears running down my face And the FEAR in my heart, held me back. Till that day i didn't talk or see you Then on May 2, 1999 my grandmother called to say you past away. Angry with myself I shut out the world, not letting anyone in I stay this way for a long time But now when i look back on it i wished i had talk to you I wished that i could have seen you one last time And have that feeling of just being able to say Good Bye! *I pray to you oh Lord, Keep my Aunt safe in your arms, I love her and always will* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is a great tribute to your family member! I liked it very much.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This is a beautiful tribute to your aunt...It was really good...But one part gave me this chills...The date on it...Cuz that is my birthday...Thanks for sharing this I hope to see more work by you... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yes, very good job on this, I'm sure your Aunt appreciates your love for her. Very good poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
awww sweet...i'm really sorry to hear about all the people in your life that past away to cancer. It really is very unfortunate and makes you think twice about what you have and the every day things in our life that we take for granted, like family. This was a very beautiful contribution to your aunt and i'm shur she knew how much you loved her...dont blame yourself for the past...shoulda coulda woulda but didnt ya know? Live in the moment because whats done is done and everything happens for a reason. I'm shur that she is looking over you...Great poem hun...But i'm very sorry... |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
xShUgArHiGhx Thank you ever so much for the up lifting words, it's been a hard 2 years on my life. Like i loved 99' and all my best friends graduated, and so did my brother but on the other hand my aunt and 4 other people i knew! so that year was very hard, and it is taking me along time to heal but i'm getting there. I guess i'm the one not to wear my emotions on my sleaves. Well anyway thank you again you've been extremely nice to me ever since i start posting i thank you. God bless ERIN Sorry about that, wasn't a happy day for me, i hope you had a wonderful birthday though. Thank you for reading my poem! LakeWalker Thank you for your extremely nice imput. I hope to see yours up! take care and God bless! Dopey_Dope Thank you for reading all my poems i hope i see your's soon! take care!! |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
very nicely done. i can truly relate to this.. my grandmother was just diagnosed with cancer not too long ago, and to lose her would be like a thousand knives stabbing me in the heart i dont know what i would do without her. i hope all has been well for you and its great to see a relationship so strong between you and your aunt. i wish you all the best! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
sorry i ment 4 people i knew died!!!!!! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is such a sad poem, but it's a beautiful tribute to your aunt. It always hurts to lose someone close to you. I hope writing this helped the pain some. I'll be praying for you and your family. False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
The very first line in here made me cry, you see i just recently lost my aunt to cancer and in the past i have lost 2 grandparents and even a dog to the terrible disease and it hurt to read this but its a terrific poem and i think ill bring mine back so you all can check it out! "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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