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Yankee10n20BFF
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0 posted 2000-11-05 09:53 PM


I wrote this in July for my friend. This is for you Linds.

Our Friendship

To me our friendship is very important
Whithout it I don't know what I would do.
Everytime I need to escape from my life
I know I can always turn to you.

Like all friends we've had our little fights
But we've gotten through them all
I guess cause our friendship is so d*** strong.
And I know together we can conquer all.

I'll never forget all the fun times we've had
And all the fun memories we've made together
I hope that you'll always be there for me
I pray that we'll be friends forever.

I can't believe you're moving away
I never thought this day would come
I figured you would always be here for me
But in about a month you'll be gone

It's gonna be so weird without you to laugh with
I wish you luck in everything you do.
You've been the best friend I've ever had Linds
And I want you to know I'll always be here for you.




No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you.

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1 posted 2000-11-06 01:19 AM


A wonderful tribute to your best friend. I think you oughta show this to this person. ONce again.....great job!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-11-06 02:48 PM


When friends leave it can be hard to let go, but your poem showed a very positive attitude and I really like it.  I hope you two can still be great friends even though you won't be together all of the time.  Great poem

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3 posted 2000-11-06 07:12 PM


Aww...that was such a sweet contribute to your friend Linds..If your friendship is as strong as you say it is i'm shur that putting a few miles between you guys wont do much, well that was written in July so maybe i should be saying i hope it hasnt done n e thing to it!! Has it?? I hope not!! Great poem...did you show her?
Slim
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since 2000-07-19
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4 posted 2000-11-06 10:08 PM


great tribute to your friend.. i hope this person knows how much you truly care for them. thanx for sharing... luved it!

"just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible"

Erin
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5 posted 2000-11-06 10:22 PM


The first half up to the moving part is the way I used to feel about my best friend...I hope that both of yous get through this move...It may be tough but if yous are true friends it wont really matter...Keep up the good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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6 posted 2000-11-10 01:52 PM


a tribute indeed.  A special way to honor a speacial friend if i may say.  Thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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