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curlygurly
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0 posted 2000-11-05 05:14 PM


We are best friends
We've known eachother for who knows how long
I know ur mom better than mine
We do everything together
I see you everyday
We talk on the phone at least 7 times a day
We share secrets
We tell eachother so much
We have so many inside jokes
They're only funny to us
We can make eachother laugh
And do it alllll the time
One little line can take us out of depression
That's what's great about us
We've been through most of elementary school
All of middle school
And now we're challenged with high school together
You're practically my sister
Actually you kinda are
We share clothes and shoes
Share gossip and stories
You are my best friend and always will be
I love you Katie


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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1 posted 2000-11-05 05:28 PM


Hey this was great. A wonderful tribute to your friend. I liked it tons upon tons.
keep it up.
show this to her!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
2 posted 2000-11-05 06:29 PM


Aww curly...what a beautiful dedication to your friend Katie. You guys are very lucky to have eachother. Its great to have a friend like yours...never let her go!! And show this to her!! She'd appreciate it so much.
curlygurly
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3 posted 2000-11-05 07:15 PM


I'm glad you guys liked it so much. Katie read it and I think that she really enjoyed it!  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Isabel Galaxia
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4 posted 2000-11-05 07:15 PM


Awww, awwww awwwwwww that's so sweet!          DANG       Ahem sorry hyper
Bel


[This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 11-05-2000).]

Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-11-05 10:17 PM


This is a very nice poem, I'm glad you have such a great friend   

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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6 posted 2000-11-10 01:36 PM


She must be very special in your life.  That is obviously explained in this poem.  She's lucky to have someone feel this way for her

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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