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curlygurly
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0 posted 2000-11-04 03:09 PM


I noticed you a while ago
When school started
But you sort of faded away
I kinda forgot about you
Then i realized
I think i like you
I don't know you
But i've noticed you
When i first saw you
I thought you looked SO good
I still think that
You dress so nice
You're just a guy
Why can't i talk to you
We've made eye contact
But does it mean anything
I like you, i think
But do you like me
I have my sources
They could set us up
But i wouldn't do that
If you don't like me
I wouldn't go out with you
Oh how i wish you liked me too
What is in the future
I'm not sure
I wish i could talk to you
I think i should
I won't know what will happen
Til i just talk to you
But that seems to hard
Do you like me too?
I'll never know
I must talk to you


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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-11-04 03:14 PM


Hey this was great and i really do think that you should take the courage and go up to the man and talk to him. You wont know if he likes you unless you do so. So fess up and get out there, Good luck by the way!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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2 posted 2000-11-04 03:40 PM



  Like Dopey always says, the Coulda Beens suck. So don't let the inspiration for this terrific poem be lost.  

  ~Carly

Forever has ended, and never came too soon...

curlygurly
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3 posted 2000-11-04 05:18 PM


Thanks for replying, i really need to like talk to him and get to know him, cept the prob is i'm a chicken. Hopefully i will, but we'll all have to wait and see hehe  
Curlz


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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4 posted 2000-11-04 05:48 PM


Ahh...Guys...cant live w/em, cant live w/out em! Ur right, you really do need to talk to him!! I'm the type of gurl whose pretty outgoing and makes up any excuse in the world to talk to someone. Sometimes i make a fool outta myself but thats what creates a memory right?? I hope that you do talk to him tho Curlz...i doubt that you'll regret it!!
Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-11-05 11:55 AM


Great job expressing these feelings.  My advice (which I hardly ever take myself) is to just go and talk!!  Yeah, I know it's not easy, but really, you will NEVER know unless you do !

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Jose Marti
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6 posted 2000-11-05 11:35 PM


curly,
dont't be a chicken
get ut there and be a…
woman about it.
I agree with dopey, it's
better not to end up in that "could have been" frame of mind.

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7 posted 2000-11-10 01:46 PM


As you've stated in the poem, you already know the answer.  Go talk to him.  What's the worst thing that could happen?  You're not gonna be with him, and that's where you are right now.  GO FOR IT

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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