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Jose Marti
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0 posted 2000-11-04 12:44 PM


a creeking is heard
a stone hand moves
braking the stillness of centuries
the pen draws close to the paper
and ancient dust falls
rust flies off
peotry is writtn anew
a poet is reborn
and a new oddesy commenced.

© Copyright 2000 Jose Marti - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-11-04 09:50 AM


Welcome back, Jose! I'm so glad that the poet in you was reborn!   I hope that we'll see a lot more of you around now. This is a great poem. It is a wonderful feeling when you realize that your writer's block is over.

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



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2 posted 2000-11-04 11:39 AM



  This kicked some royal tooshie.   I loved it, just loved it.

  ~Carly

Forever has ended, and never came too soon...

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3 posted 2000-11-04 01:00 PM


Welcome back oh mighty ancient poet come back anew.......hope to see more great stuff.



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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4 posted 2000-11-04 02:04 PM


welcome back, hope that your poetry is better than ever!  
Curlz


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5 posted 2000-11-04 02:05 PM


welcome back, hope that your poetry is better than ever!  
Curlz


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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6 posted 2000-11-04 06:21 PM


Good poem, I like it

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Jose Marti
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7 posted 2000-11-05 10:15 AM


thanx for welcoming me bck guys
it feels good to be back on this path of the poet,
a thouisand miles from where I left off

Isabel Galaxia
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8 posted 2000-11-05 10:18 AM


Hey...you haven't posted in a LONG TIME, lol.  I'll write you soon....things have been weird.  It's great, welcome back  
Bel

Jose Marti
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9 posted 2000-11-05 09:52 PM


it's true bel,
it has been a while since I posted
voy a estar esperando lo que me escibiras

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10 posted 2000-11-06 05:59 PM


The gift of poetry is back on your hands.  welcome back

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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