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Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
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0 posted 2000-11-03 03:32 AM


I've Found What I've Been Looking For (The Love He Has For Me)

Someone who Wants the Same Things as Me.
Someone who Feels Feelings as Mutual as Mine.
Someone who Has the Same Needs as Me.
Someone who Really Wants to Be With Me For Who I Am On the Inside.
Someone who's Thinking Just Like Me.
Someone who Won't Torture.
Someone who's Not Scared to Really Want for Me.
Someone who Doesn't Care About the Past, Just the Present and OUR Future.
Someone who Doesn't Want to Hurt Me.
Someone who Cares How My Days Are.
Someone who Can Communicate With Me.
Someone who Doesn't Care About My Car.
Someone who Wants to Be a Part of Me.
Someone who Wants to Be Part of My Life.
Someone who Worries About Me.
Someone who Disappears That Meaningless Knife.
Someone who Cherishes Me.
Someone who Likes My Well-Being.
Someone who Sees Me For Me.
Someone who Won't Be Fleeing.
Someone who Won't Run Away From Me.
Someone who Remembers Every Little Thing.
Someone who Adores Me.
Someone who Can Be My King.
Someone who Listen to Me.
Someone who Treats Me Like a Queen.
Someone who Understands Me.
Someone who Makes Me Beam.
Someone who Needs Me.
Someone who I Can Make Gleam.
Someone who Trusts Me.
Someone who Lights the Fire in My Eyes.
Someone who Likes to Spend Time With Me.
Someone who Trusts Me Around Other Guys.
Someone who Just Likes to Hang Out With Me.
Someone who Will Always Make Me Laugh.
Someone who Knows Everything About Me.
Someone who Can Give Me a Bath.
Someone who Will Never Shove Me.
Someone who Will Always Want to Stay Together.
Someone who Respects Me.
Someone who Thinks I Am Light as a Feather.
Someone who is My Best-Friend and Says Their Best-Friend is Me.
Someone who Likes to Just Talk on the Phone.
Someone who Will Always Be There for Me.
Someone who Makes Sure I Get Home.
Someone who Will Fall in Love Me.
Someone who Takes What I Say to Heart.
Someone who Will Make Love to Me.
Someone who Promises to Never Part.
Someone who Will Be Loved Completely By Me.

( **stephani ***
"A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." 3:08 a.m 11-3-2000.





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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-11-03 07:36 AM


Welcome to Passions Stephani!

We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship. We look forward to having you share your efforts with us and please keep in mind that we are very supportive of each other. The pleasure you receive from reading comments on your work is the same pleasure others need by receiving your comments on theirs. This is a rule that all poets here follow. We invite you to join the family!

This was a wonderful full post ... I hope you'll find someone to fit many of these qualities!  I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message)

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-11-03 02:01 PM


You're a great new member to have. You've only just joined and i am already beginning to fully enjoy your prescense here. Anyway, i like the poem and the repeition is nice. I loved the line about giving you a bath. Sorry but that hormornal teenaged driven mind of mine took control for a bit. Hehehe
anyway welcome to passions and i hope you have a great stay!!!



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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
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3 posted 2000-11-03 03:16 PM


Hey, welcome   I think this is a very good poem because it clearly tells what you're looking for in a guy.  Good job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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4 posted 2000-11-03 06:34 PM


Hey Hun!! Welcome to passions! Its an amazing feelings to have someone like the person you described in your poem...its almost undescribable but u did a great job in expressing how you feel!! Awesome first poem and i cant wait to see more!!
keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
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5 posted 2000-11-03 07:08 PM


Nice first poem. i like the repitition. I also really like the quote at the bottom. Welcome                           Keoni
Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~
6 posted 2000-11-03 10:14 PM


Thanks everyone!!! I tried my hardest to define love, and I mainly wrote this because of what my boy-friend told me last night. So this is pretty much dedicated to him. I THINK I found Love for the 2nd time in my life. By the way, if you read my profile, I've been a member of this forum for almost a year now. This is the 3rd name I've used. thanks for the BIG welcome anyway though. Much appreciated  

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
::

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
7 posted 2000-11-03 10:16 PM


Sounds like this guy is really special...Keep him it sounds like he is worth love...Good work too!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~
8 posted 2000-11-07 02:02 AM


*~bump~*

yeah a few words are missing cause i typed it out too fast

my bad


(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
::

Acies
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9 posted 2000-11-08 06:16 PM


I see as a new member, you already know how to bump  

well kidding aside, WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!
AS you can see, we are all one family, and we are all here for each other.  Don't forget that....we do have some balck sheeps around  , but you know...that's life  

hey, what about "Someone who loves all the small things about you"

Thanks for the wonderful read




I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Dopey Dope
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10 posted 2000-11-08 06:28 PM


----------->   <-------------
Black Sheep



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 142

11 posted 2000-11-08 07:35 PM


This was a very good first poem...I loved how you described everything that you want in a guy...it's exactly what i want to!!
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