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Equality Within Tyrants
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Equality Within Tyrants |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Equality within Tyrants: Seize the tyrant! Burn her heart! Wither in a cess pool Of blood and water. What sin can I speak of individually If all sins are broken? What life can you live now While I die in a rotting corner? Yes, smirk that nonchalant smirk! Die the hidious death! Live your insidious life, And so will I my love, so will I.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Huh, well, I don't know what to say about this one. I guess it doesn't seem to have the power that some of your other poems have. Of course, now that I've said that everyone's going to love it and it will be your favorite and I won't be able to change my reply!  But anyway, don't mind my opinions, I'm just another bum on the street. Keep writing "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey~ I agree with Lakewalker...This one didnt bring that many thoughts to my head as your other ones do...But it is just as good!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I have to bump this, I feel bad that it only got two replies. You deserve more than that "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lakewalker~ I dont feel bad that me and you only replied to it...I feel that me and you were the only ones lucky enough so far to read it...Alot of these people are missing out now... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
None of you should feel bad. I would usually bump up the poems myself if I think some people haven't seen it. This one......well this one I let slide away. hehehe I agreed with you two on the lack of power and depth so I decided that maybe nobody else should read it and if it came up on it's own....then oK! Anyway, lake walker......sweet of you to care and think i deserve more *pinches your cheeks* hehe rock on. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I disagree with all, and you too Dopey. I think this is one of your powerful poems. It hit me right away. The only thing I didn't like is the way a person would stoop down to the same level. Or am I misreading it as I have a lot. Awsome read Dopes I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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