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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
It doesn't matter what you say It doesn't matter what you do I really don't like you In fact I hate you You hurt me once I don't wanna talk about it You hurt me twice It's kinda repetitive, don't ya think? Don't try to talk to me again You hurt me when I did that too Why are you so mean to me You broke my heart SEVERAL times I can't help it I really really can't stand you You were horrible to me And you're not worth my time Don't talk to me Don't bother me again You aren't worth my time Just stay away "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
If it is that bad, tell this guy. No one should stay in a relationship that is only dragging you down, I'm one to talk, I'm just barely getting over one, but if he hurt you, then there is no better reason to move on. I can relate to the feeling of this poem more than you can imagine. Keoni |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Thanks Keoni. Don't worry we're not dating anymore, he broke up with me in July, well that's when it was officially over. If he hurt me while we were dating, it would most definetly be over!  Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
PLEASE tell me you didn't talk to him again!!!! Dear Lord girl, he's not worth the time and heartbreak...ack!!!! BETTER OFF ALONE! Bel |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
In my opinion I think girls get attached to guys...And then when the guy breaks up with the girl they are hurt...I think that guys do it over and over cuz they know the girl did it before so she will come back to them once more... You are telling him exactly how you feel...Let your feelings show so that he knows how you are feeling about him... Guys that do this to girls are gonna get theirs in the future...And they deserve it too!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello, glad to be back!! this was a great poem! Although I'm not quite sure what you mean, i have an idea... But I have always gone by my advice from my coach... If he breaks your heart once, its his fault, if he does it twice its yours!!! Go by it.. it works, belive me!!! hehe good work! luv ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the way you used anger in this poem, it sounded very forceful. Good job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think the poem is nice but what erin said i tend to disagree. I mean you can't generalize this into GUYS do this and GUYS do that. Cuz i mean, we're teenagers......we don't know crap about relationships. Some do, Most don't. Like i've said in the past, this is a time for expiramentation. It's quite hard to find somebody our age who plans on getting into a fully comitted relationship, settling down, fall madly in love (true love) with the partner, and just be happy with their occasional bumps, but overall prevailing and eventually getting married. Maybe they won't get married, but finding a mature, strong relationship that is based upon those standards is oftly hard to find.........i mean, ONE person like that (me) is hard to find, let alone two!!! Anyway.....but still......I think that at our age we can't really say "oh guys suck!" or... "Oh women suck!"......cuz frankly, we're not developed with the knowledge that we'll eventually come to learn with time. Well there's my two cents....maybe even 3. Anyway good poem, nice thoughs, and a great read.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I have only one thing to say: "You go girl!!!" Nice to see someone who is strong from within. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
You expressed your feelings loud and clear in this one curly. Believe me...i've felt that way about some people to. The best thing i think is if you can, just move on and try to forget about them cause it sounds like you really hate this guy. I hope things get better for ya! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Thanks for replying guys acire: yeah i kinda feel the same way sometimes, i just wanna shout out "ya know what! I don't need you! Go away little boy, shoo shoo!" of course he lives an hour away so I'm lucky i don't have to see him everyday. thanks for ur support sugarhigh: yeah i have moved on, i don't need him anymore. i've now realized that i don't need him as much as i thought i did! Dopey: yeah that's true, but this was a speical case. if you knew the whole story you'd TOTALLY agree with me! Lakewalker: thanks i appreciate it Cutie: that is actually really good advice. i regret getting back together with him, esp since i know the ending. Erin: yeah i totally agree, i was too attatched to him and that's what made it hurt so bad, thanks "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Thanks for replying guys acire: yeah i kinda feel the same way sometimes, i just wanna shout out "ya know what! I don't need you! Go away little boy, shoo shoo!" of course he lives an hour away so I'm lucky i don't have to see him everyday. thanks for ur support sugarhigh: yeah i have moved on, i don't need him anymore. i've now realized that i don't need him as much as i thought i did! Dopey: yeah that's true, but this was a speical case. if you knew the whole story you'd TOTALLY agree with me! Lakewalker: thanks i appreciate it Cutie: that is actually really good advice. i regret getting back together with him, esp since i know the ending. Erin: yeah i totally agree, i was too attatched to him and that's what made it hurt so bad, thanks "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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