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jytree
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0 posted 2000-11-01 02:05 PM


Purity in your heart,
Purity in your mind,
Unite yourself with God leave your problems behind,

Why do men run from God,
On the hand why so little faith to praise him with a yes or a nod,

Most people cannot understand,
That it is truly God's love thats in demand,
Break me down or lord,
Build me back up,
Let me be nice as a angel,
And strong as a truck,

Fill my heart full of fire,
Let it be that you are my only desire,

Talk to me God,
Show me you heart,
Because what is set before us is his art,

God you rule,
King of all,
God is to cool,
Cause he gave satan the big fall!


Dear world this is my light that you see,
Follow it to find me to be finally set free.



Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born



© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-11-01 02:23 PM


This is wonderful, I like it a lot!!!!

"Most people cannot understand,
That it is truly God's love thats in demand,"


"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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2 posted 2000-11-01 03:45 PM



  Hey. I loved it..Loved the concept too..

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


keoni
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3 posted 2000-11-01 05:01 PM


Very Nice. I couldn't agree more.
                         Keoni

Ina
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4 posted 2000-11-01 05:22 PM


its a cool poem....but im too fond of G-d seems to me he is never there when u need him and he takes away your loved ones....thats just my opininon but very nice poem
~Ina~

Ina
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5 posted 2000-11-01 05:23 PM


its a cool poem....but im not too fond of G-d seems to me he is never there when u need him and he takes away your loved ones....thats just my opininon but very nice poem
~Ina~

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6 posted 2000-11-01 05:46 PM


hey so God kicks butt......i completely agree with you on that. GReat concept!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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Slim
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7 posted 2000-11-01 08:20 PM


hey, i really liked this. it really makes people question their faith in God.. personally, i think it makes people think about their life and the ways that God is a part of it. great job!  

Slim

"just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible"

LoveAll
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8 posted 2000-11-01 08:29 PM


All I can say is AMEN!  You have a passion for Jesus...and he is really speaking through you in this forum!  I pray that your poem will continue to touch lives.  
"Fill my heart full of fire,
Let it be that you are my only desire"
I love it.  Just keep writing!
God Bless and Keep Smiling    

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

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9 posted 2000-11-01 08:55 PM


These are wonderful thoughts about God. He is such and awesome God!! Thank you for sharing the fire with us!  

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.



Erin
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10 posted 2000-11-01 09:50 PM


Whether he is there or not when we need him he is always there...Watching down on us...Even if something bad is happening...God is our creator and we should be happy...This was an amazing poem...And I loved the last couple lines!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

jytree
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11 posted 2000-11-03 09:11 AM


My head is surely spinning after all these replys that are on here I thank you all for your replys,
You have exceeded my expections for the poem,
So thank you everyone.

Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born



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12 posted 2000-11-04 12:00 PM


It's really great to know that you have a strong belief and faith in Him.  Thanks for sharing this lovely poem

A.M.D.G. my friend
Ad Majorem Dei Gloriam
For the greater Glory of God

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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