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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2000-10-30 06:32 PM

An Epitaph For A Lost Friend
You ate away
at her body
never reaching
her soul
her body fought
the darkness,
the spasames
of pain,she
never gave up,
but the yellowish
tint got worse
You brought smiles
to everyones faces
never pity
and now you are gone
and your family has died
with you
Steel magnolias whisper
your words of wisdom
for us to hear
so young but yet so old
your dreams were never
fufilled, but are worked
on by all
i never knew you as i
wished i could have
butI will not be sorry
for that's not what
you ever wanted
goodbye Stephanie

~Well,this poem was wrote for two people although one of them I never knew the other one i love deeply because he is a friend, love and a mentor~
Rest In peace
~Stephanie Chambers~
1984-1998

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2000-10-30 07:26 PM

that was really nice. It feels good to get your thoughts out on paper when someone close has passed away. Stay strong
Keoni

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-10-30 08:00 PM

I am sorry that you lost your friend...I lost someone close to me...A really good friend...And to this day I still cant get over it...Beautiful tribute to your friend!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-30 09:58 PM

This was so sad ina......i know you're going through some problems but keep that head ok mmmmmmkay? mmmmmmkay!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-10-31 07:11 AM

You've expressed your emotions well in this piece Ina. I'm truly sorry for your loss and will keep you in my thoughts. Take care,

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-10-31 02:56 PM

Yeah, really good job of getting your feelings out, this is a great poem you've written!!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

6 posted 2000-10-31 07:18 PM

Yellowish tint....I think I'm a little confused. It's great though, keep your head up and smile
Bel

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

7 posted 2000-10-31 09:30 PM

yellowish tint has to do with cancer. thank you everyone for your comments.Brad(stephanie's twin brother)really appreciated it..
bye PLUR
~Ina~

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

8 posted 2000-10-31 10:42 PM

This is a beautiful tribute to this person. It's so awful when someone so young dies, but you have glorified her short life well. I hope writing this helped you deal with your feelings. Keep up the good work!

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.

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