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Best Friends |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
This poem was written for my best friend who means the world to me and whom i absolutely cherish. Best Friends I often forget to tell you just how much I truly love you And to be as kind, intelligent and loving as you are there are so few How much I care for you no words can express You mean so much to me I must confess You are always there for me in any time of want or need If only others, like I do, could follow your lead I can never be serious with you when I want to be mad, For you always have some odd way of making me happy or at least unsad You walk with me, you talk with me, but most importantly you listen to me Without you I just wouldn't be, for when im near you I can always set my heart free I don't know what I would do if I hadn't met you I'm admitting honestly truthfully I have no clue You help make me who I am instead of who I could be When I'm around, you don't mind me expressing myself, I am free to be me This is something I want to make clear, To lose you is one of my biggest fears As I look back on our days spent together, I know that you'll be my best friend forever "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey this was great!! It's great you have someone like that, a lot of people don't, but you already know that. So keep it up, nice job Bel |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It's good you realize this now during the friendship, I hope you share this with your friend! I bet they'd love to get it. The poem is good, I like it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
HEy this was a wonderful tribute to your friend. Keep posting!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
thanx to the ppl that replied.. and yes, i have shared it with my special friend who absolutely luved it!! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful vision of your friendship Slim ... those who have such deep emotional bonds, are truly fortunate. Very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
That was beauitful!! I loved it!! Best friends are a wonderful gift, and I think I am truely blessed to have one. She is a wonderful and amazing person (luv ya Steph!!) Well your poem was excellent, Keep up the great work, I hope to read more from you soon!! Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~< !signature--> ~*~YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt.~*~ ~*~ WhAt CaN U dO wHeN ThE OnLy 1 WhO cAn MaKe U sToP cRyiNg iS tHe 1 wHo mAdE U sTaRt?~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good one!!!This is how I felt about my best friend...But not anymore I dont even consider her a good friend anymore...But its good that you have this person... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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