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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: This is written differently because it's a song. The tune, you don't know.....and the way it's sung either.......but read it....hate it....praise it......i don't know. Lately Drugged: Sitting around the bend With blood shot eyes. Snorting up my daily coke Hoping to fly. Wishing up a star. A star in demise. Tearing up my books With worded lies. Drugged up mystery takes my soul. Kill ancestry taking toll. Nature saga upon plate. I pick my hat up. Thank you Mrs. Late. It's all over These sorrow tears. Getting older Along the years. I still get higher With a tripped up styler. Stare down mistress With lovely kisses. Drugged up mystery takes my soul. Kill ancestry taking toll. Nature saga upon plate. I pick my hat up. Thank you Mrs. Late.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It's too bad you can't sing it for us!  I like the way this is written though. Have you written many songs?"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was really great, I wanna hear the tune!! Oh well. I'll live. Once again, greazt job.. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great tone, i like this a lot, i want to hear more of these songs! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Rodeo Jones Junior Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 18San Jose, CA, USA |
I really like this passage: It's all over These sorrow tears. Getting older Along the years. = Do you have any music posted online? mp3.com perhaps? I wanna hear this song too... "Where is fancy bread, in the heart, or in the head?" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Dopey....hey I really liked this. I read it like a song...probably not how you intended it...but oh well, I'm not physic  (yes I realize I probably spelled that wrong). Drugs aye?  This this about....you? Hmm......Bel [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Lake- I have been writing more songs than poetry lately. Let's just say that in the span of the past month i've written about 20 songs and only 15 poems. More songs than poems? HOW ODD!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway hehe. With songs I am trying to master the art of complex simplicity..... Rodeo- sorry buddy, i don't have a band just yet. I'm playing guitar and all here alone but the band is not yet formed......soon enough though buddy.... Isabel- Drugs yep.......but it's not really about me taking drugs cuz i don't do drugs. Just me in this hazy, messed up mood. Like... i was all groggy and sleepy and dizzy so it felt like i was messed up on drugs and stuff. DRUGS ARE BAD!!!!! hehe the rest- monkeys are funny "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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