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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
Junior Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 36
Fitchburg, Ma, Usa

0 posted 2000-10-29 09:51 AM

My wall looks so scary and yet far away
It looks like everything comes and goes
I cannot climb the wall of life
It looks so high and so scary and sad
Do I dare move or shall I stay here
No I'll move and see what's up there
Oh no! Spasm I scream

Love enters and it's great and I'm scared
This guy is so nice and understanding
Yet do I trust him?
No I don't I lose it
Love enters again this time I'm happy
I'm loving it

Death arives at my face
With my dad he's face 2 face with death
He must be scared
He's not
He dies 12-23-99

I know if I give up on life now
I won't see the rest and how is it going to end up
I am stronger than anyone thinks
People think I am weak I ignore them
I don't talk to them
I walk away

I am never giving up in life
If I do I'll stop myself or try to

Thats the wall of life

~CPAD~

If you fail, don't give up you'll never know whats going to happen.

You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-10-29 01:35 PM

Hey well nice thoughts, i loved the poem. Never give up....and when you do, just come to us at passions and i know i'd be more than glad than to help you out.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-29 01:36 PM

"Do I dare move or shall I stay here
No I'll move and see what's up there"

Even though this talks about some tough things you still has a positive attitude, that's really great. The poem is very good, thank you for sharing it, and I like the advice to never give up!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-10-30 09:19 AM

I love the message you are trying to tell everyone in this poem. Thanks so much for sharing it. Awesome write and keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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