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Is Being Considerate Too Much to Ask?
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Is Being Considerate Too Much to Ask? |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
[This is not about anyone in this forum- but I just had to get this off my chest-Dean] I have a strong pet peeve N o one should blame me for, C ause these drive me up the wall O ft make me feel so poor! N ow what is it that bugs me S o much, I am incensed? I nconsiderate people D o this with much offense! E ver depend on some one R elying on what they say A nd then you find they've strung you along? T hey've ruined the rest of my day! E ach of us have weakness P lease, that I'm not perfect, I'll give, E ven so, I show others respect O nly some show they're insensitive! P lease regard my feelings L eave me alone, if you don't care E ach of us deserves--His Considerate share!!! I seek to be me- and all I can be! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Bravo! Wonderful acrostic poem Euclid ... these are really tough to do, and yet, you've crafted this very well. Great poem and message!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
These are really great thoughts and this is a relly good poem! ...those darn inconsiderate people are ruining the world!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Most acrostic poems have been steryotyped into being all boring..but this was anything but!! I loved the word choices you made. Great job. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great, i loved the message  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Very cool poem...i loved the style it was written in |
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