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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Your words...a constant reminder Of what I did and why I did it I wish I was stronger And I wish I could void your words Your words hurt me more than anything They hurt more than the bruises on my body Another constant reminder... Bruises, they fade with time Scars, remain forever to remind me So hit me again, does it help you? Do it make you feel better? Yeah, hit me again, then have another beer That makes all your problems go away doesn't it?!?! Hope you think about what it does to me Because if I remember right, last night I was fat and skanky and today I'm too damn skinny and pretty and who knows what I will be tomorrow What was that you just said? oh, I should've killed myself when I tried 'eh? Yeah, well you should've hit me a little harder The you could've done it yourself So now I sit...here bleeding and crying again Why do you need to do this?? Just remember... My blood stops flowing at some point My bruises leave a few days later And your alcohol will fade and you'll be gone for a few hours But... My scars will... F O R E V E R R E M A I N ... ~*~to those of you whom I know and have become friends with...this is my biggest reason for being gone for a while. That and I've been posting and moderating in 'Poetry in the System'...please, I'm not looking for help, just a place to post my piece and get feedback (on my work of course) I MISS YOU ALL!!! I'll try to be around more often.~*~ *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey chick, great piece. Keep your head up, everything will get better. Talk to you later. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
My heart just goes out to you my Pryncess. I am not gonna jabber about things you obviously don't wanna hear. As you have stated after the poem. I am just sickened by your situation...maybe I should go to Colorado and kick someone's ass...Sorry, i had to say that. No one deserves to be hit, specially a girl. I don't care how tiny or how big the girl is...no one has the right to hit a girl...PERIOD!!! I'm so sorry you have to go thru all this stupidity. Damn, it just pisses me off. Take your time, come back when you feel most comfortable..you know we wont forget you, and we'll always be here when you come back  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well, welcome back. Great piece and i hope all gets better.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was incredibly emotional Jess. Your words held such impact and heartache. I know you don't want further feedback on the actual situation ... so I'll only say if this is personal experience, please get away from them whoever they are. Excellent expression ... Hugs to you ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this had a lot of power because of the emotion in it. Well done!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jessica~ I dont know what this is all about...If this is personal or not...I havent really talked to you in awhile...You wrote an excellent piece though...I hope that you come to me if you ever need anything...Keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Thanks all for replying! Glad you liked the piece. You are all so kind...I think I'll substitute this place for my cold and lonely bedroom. Thanks again!*Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey girlie! This was great..im sorry you have to go through these things but stay strong and keep writing! ~!*<3 always Kiley "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow...very powerful...but I'm lost...help please..?  Bel [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 10-30-2000).] |
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