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curlygurly
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0 posted 2000-10-27 07:28 PM


Dreams

Dreams come to you in the night
They fill your head with the sweetest things
Dreams are peaceful and full of life and colors
The colors are so bright and beautiful
Dreaming beneath the stars is wonderful
You wake up in the middle of the night
Look up at the stars
And go back to sleep only to have another dream




"I feel fine enough I guess
considering everything's a mess"
Barenaked Ladies



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1 posted 2000-10-27 08:37 PM



  Hey. You did a terrific job of telling the sweet side of dreams, I appload you. Keep it up...

  ~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


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2 posted 2000-10-27 08:39 PM


Yea well this was good, we all love dreams



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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3 posted 2000-10-28 04:03 PM


hey   this was great..very true, too

LOL Dopey that was cute..u crack me up  

keep writing! **DQ


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4 posted 2000-10-28 04:17 PM


Ahhhh....dreams   nice poem!

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5 posted 2000-10-29 07:54 PM


Don't you just sometimes wish that you never wake up anymore cause of your dream? You did a reallygreat job on this one curly  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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6 posted 2000-10-30 06:05 PM


Yeah tru unless they're NIGHTMARES!!  Like all of MINE!!!  Sorry, boredom.  Wooooooowwwwwwwww I need some SLEEP!!!  I'll shut up now, it's a good one, shorest one I've seen from you
Bel

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7 posted 2000-11-21 04:30 PM



curlygurly-
   ah yes...i do love dreams..
   very nice.  

   *smiles*,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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kimmy
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8 posted 2000-11-21 08:45 PM


dreams are usually fun and this was a really good poem...i liked it..
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9 posted 2000-11-24 06:34 PM


Yea good dreams are good.
but ive been through the worst dreams imaginable.............ew..
so in conclusion...bad dreams are bad.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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10 posted 2000-11-24 07:58 PM


There is nothing like a beautiful dream, is there? The only thing about good dreams is that you have to wake up sometime!  

You describe them beautifully. Keep up the good work!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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