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Morouxshi San
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since 2000-10-11
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0 posted 2000-10-22 12:19 PM


-=A Candy-coated Reality=-

acting under the influence,
she comes talk to me.
she makes no sense,
i sense this negative vibe.
under the influence,
thats how they call it.
sociological candycoating,
just what i needed.

she tends to do this,
its not unusual.
i try to help her,
but im just overreacting,
overreacting,
thats how they call it.
psichological candycoating,
just what i needed.

i need to get her off it,
off the habit.
its not good for her,
its going to kill her.
a habit,
thats how they call it.
physiological candycoating,
just what i needed.

is it not hard enough,
just me trying to help?
im going crazy here,
i just whant to help.
crazy.
crazy they call me.
no candycoating there
afterall im just a guy...


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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Isabel Galaxia
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Posts 733

1 posted 2000-10-22 12:36 PM


Wow!  That was....wow.  Speechless.  Can't think of anything to say....that was great.......geez..
Bel


Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
-"Beautiful" CREED

branden726
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2 posted 2000-10-22 12:42 PM


Dang boy.....wow good job i am kinda just like in the first reply speechlesss but trust me ive been thru the same thing before tried to help someone thats hurting themselve but instead everyone thinks im crazy. good poem

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

branden726
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3 posted 2000-10-22 12:42 PM


Dang boy.....wow good job i am kinda just like in the first reply speechlesss but trust me ive been thru the same thing before tried to help someone thats hurting themselve but instead everyone thinks im crazy. good poem

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Child of the Stars
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4 posted 2000-10-22 01:27 PM



  WOW. Psychological candycoating..that's pretty dang creative. I loved this.. keep up the kickin' stuff and stay cool..

   ~Carly

The people walking in darkness
have seen a great light;
on those living in the land of the shadow of death
a light has dawned.
~Isaiah 9:1-2

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-10-22 02:11 PM


Well San this was great as usual. You are fitting right into the passion forums and i know everybody appreciates your work to the fullest as i Do. this is the 5th post, so HAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Anyway the poem was very creative and original. If you'd like to explain this a bit for me then i'd like to know. Who's this GIRL you keep talkin about. Unless this is an old poem, i know who.....but otherwise you got me wondering.



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
6 posted 2000-10-22 02:25 PM


Yes Dope, 4 replies means a new poem...

and for the record this girl is NOT, i repeat, not the same one as "Impresionism" this is just a friend of mine. She's a workoholic and is always in exess stress, i consider workoholics people who need help, just like this poem could apply to a alcoholic or a drug addict. i think she needs proffesional help, and no this is not a old poem, brand new from last night.
=)


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-10-22 04:35 PM


So what happens if you don't get 4 replies???

I like this poem, it's well done.  ...she must not see it as a problem- oh no, that's denial, the first stage! Good job with this one

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Morouxshi San
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since 2000-10-11
Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico
8 posted 2000-10-22 07:01 PM


well if i dont get 4 replies then i dont know.
maybe ill reply something, dope always replies, plus some other person like you lakewalker could reply so i could get like 3
and id tell myself "close enough" and post a new one...


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2000-10-23 05:47 AM


Psychological ...
Sociological ...
Physiological ...

Excellent San! I really loved your style and presentation in this ... very nicely composed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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