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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
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Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-10-21 08:57 PM



I love you
Those are my words to you
That will always remain true
No other guy could take your place
Or the smile on your face
You mean the world to me
And to my heart, I gave you the key
You made your way into my heart
And vowed that we shall never part
I've never felt this way about any other guy
And that is not a lie
I know I've told you this many times before
And you're going to hear it more and more
The words that will always remain true
I love you


*~*~to my boyfriend and the love of my life, Jeremy Peters*~*~


~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

© Copyright 2000 Nikkisweet - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-10-21 09:16 PM


Well it sounds like things are going great for you   I like the peom, good job on it

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2 posted 2000-10-21 09:28 PM


Love is grand and i hope things work well.



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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3 posted 2000-10-21 10:00 PM


Very well written.  i hope you show him this poem.  This is very sweet and it should sweep him off his feet

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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4 posted 2000-10-21 10:06 PM


i love it!!!!!!!!!!! thats all i gots to say its wonderful

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

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5 posted 2000-10-21 11:59 PM


Ahh...Love..aint it the best? Your so lucky to be in a loving relationship. Thats one of the best things in the world. Great poem, i hope you show it to him. You could never remind him enough how much you love him.
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