Teen Poetry #3 |
Spider's Kiss |
Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Spider's Kiss: A spider's web shattered. Two fates meet at the center. Blushing brilliance flares. A heart to fully enter. Nine lives gone forever. Eternal consequences lost. Pacing a dead end road. Finger tips of frost. Lost ashes gained back. The thought of completion. A puzzle reaches its whole Afraid of deletion. Moving along the road of future, And on with our fruitful ways. The spider web is shattered. A kiss to end our days. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
great writting. nine lives lost forever. youre a cat now? sorry bout that. great writting, i love this cycle. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Vreni |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, this is good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Im glad you like it San......lake thanks....and Vreni.....it means a LOT to me when you say you LOVE my poem because i love your work. So thanks for liking and you can print anything out... "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
This rocks! ~IRIS |
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