this is how I feel (a love poem)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
Junior Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 36
Fitchburg, Ma, Usa

0 posted 2000-10-20 11:39 AM

Where has the time gone already OCT
After this year we will go on our ways
No more hugs no more smiles when we pass
I'll be lost in my world with out you in my life
You've done so many amazing things
I don't know how to thank you
I'll miss your eyes looking at mine
Then your my eyes looking at me
When you hold me it makes me so happy
All I want is to be held for ever.

I look back at two years ago
I was lonely confuesed sad lost
I didn't know what to do anymore
Except kill myself because I was worth less
I didn't want to smile anymore
I just sat in my room watching TV or I was online
My dad was so sad because I was lost
No one could help me and I was so confuesed
Until you entered my life.

Now we will slowly have to let go
I don't want that
You probably don't either
All I can think of is
I am not that girl who I was two years ago
I am different and happy and not lost
You showed me the right way to go in life
I never want to let go of this love
Please don't forget me I'll never forget you..

I'll love you always..
~*~Min~*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-10-20 11:50 AM

You got your thoughts out very well in this poem. I think it's well done, i like it all.
"Now we will slowly have to let go
I don't want that
You probably don't either"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-20 04:12 PM

I agree with lakewalker and great job!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2000-10-20 04:27 PM

This is really cool. I got out of it maybe your leaving school. I just had this same problem. I graduated and had to leave behind someon I love. It's hard to keep the bonds together, but if you want to, then you'll just have to work a little extra Peace
Keoni

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-10-21 10:28 AM

Hey. Great job...you stated your feelings very well. Happy writing and stay strong...

~Carly

The people walking in darkness
have seen a great light;
on those living in the land of the shadow of death
a light has dawned.
~Isaiah 9:1-2

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2000-10-22 04:09 PM

I just don't understand that if both of you don't really feel like letting go, why you have to. Seems like this guys means so much to you and has showed you a path no one else had been able to. Hold on tight and never let go......nice work and keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.