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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
much emptyness around all real feelings have evaded my sight no place for my comfort no hand to hold in mine all questions asked all things said though the real meaning has been put away so, i close my eyes; in hope for love outside reality >?:"!@%***+~>?"!@*&+><  !@$%&&*i haven't writen in a while so i just kinda put this together ............ hope u liked it : ) !@##)*(^&*+)_<><:"~^*&#@ sometimes i stand, sometimes i sit... i never know what there is to know.. i never could write a poem.. : ) |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This poem was really cool. I DID like it!! Keep it up!! ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was great, I liked it. keep writing! Luv, sweetstuff ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job, hope to see more of your work around here!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is the kind that should be published if you ask me, keep writing and keep sharing --- please  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is really good. So, you had writers block?? That sucks, but good job on this one "all questions asked all things said" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nice one here...You get straight to the point...Keep it up!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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buttercup411 Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41miami, fl, u.s |
thanks guys !@##)*(^&*+)_<><:"~^*&#@ sometimes i stand, sometimes i sit... i never know what there is to know.. i never could write a poem.. : ) |
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