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Gifts of poison candy
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Gifts of poison candy |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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Teddy bears and lollipops go dancing in your eyes Gummi bears and lemondrops that cover Daddy's lies The presents flow, the loving stops You wonder why she cries... She wants to leave, she wants to drop Below the darkened skies. "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is well written, it gets the meaning out and flows very well. Great poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You are a VERY talented writer and im honored to know you. You rock cutie pie!! Keep it up cuz i love your poems!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
love your way of writting. just love it. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Thanks for your replies everyone!! They really mean a lot to me. I feel so speshul... ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is the first post I read by you, and I must say I was delighted. You are very talented and I hope to read more by you in the future. Just another fan, IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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