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JoLake137
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0 posted 2000-10-14 08:49 PM



I look at you,
you're looking at her,
and a tear rolls down my cheek.
But when she's not around,
you're looking at me.
What am I supposed to think?
You understand me like no other,
from the moment we first talked,
we clicked and became part of eachother.
Maybe it was fate,
or simply luck.
But the truth is I'm falling in love with you,
and it scares me.
What if you love your girlfriend to much,
and I'm just wasting my time.
I don't want to loose the bond we share,
and a friendship like ours.
Everytime we talk,
it's hurts beyond belief.
No-one has ever made me feel this way before,
and I pray that someday we will be together.

Until then I love you hun


*** I wrote this poem back in august and it's now october... But the difference now is that he's mine.  Some people doubted that we'd end up together, even I did but it was meant to be... So I decided to repost the poem, because it means so much to me that I can be with the guy I love.

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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-10-14 08:53 PM


I hope everything works out great for you two   It's sounds like you really love this guy!  Great poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Erin
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2 posted 2000-10-14 08:55 PM


I remember reading this one...And its good to hear that you got what you wanted...Now just make sure it was worth it for you and for him...Good job!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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3 posted 2000-10-14 09:09 PM


Im so happy you got the guy! Im shur that you deserved him 1,000,000 times more than that gurl he was with did. You loved him with a true, pure heart and that is what counts and look at that, you  got the guy!! Congrats and great poem =o)~
Erin
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4 posted 2000-10-14 09:14 PM


Shugar~
Its good that she got him but how would you feel if you were that other girl...You wouldnt like it...You know what I mean???


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29
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5 posted 2000-10-14 10:44 PM


This poem is so good... and such a hard situation   i've been there a few times... and frankly it sucks.  but if he deosn't know what he wants then he isnt; for you.  keep your chin up, goold luck!
~*Pixie*~

jeremydraul
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6 posted 2000-10-14 10:46 PM


great post herre, great to hear what happen, besta luck!

jeremy r


"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

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7 posted 2000-10-15 07:35 PM


Yea great poem and i liked it. But i tend to think about the person LEFT OUT in this picture. You know, i just hope that the guy your with right now didn't CHEAT on his former girlfriend with you because then he'd be rotten in my eyes. I hope what he did was ........he liked you more....you liked him..... and he left his girlfriend for you rather than CHEAT on her while they were together. Cuz frankly, you HAVE TO admit it.....it's a rotten thing to do. Oh well hope everything works out and stuff.



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JoLake137
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8 posted 2000-10-16 06:07 PM


Thanks everyone for responding.  It means alot to here what ya'll think.  And just so ya know he didn't cheat on his girl with me...he just liked me and vice versa.  I'm so happy things are going great and everyone around here always makes things better.Thanx Bunches

ME

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