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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
You are the one My dating life is done You are the one I trust I know this can't just be lust You are so sweet The one I would die to meet I hope you feel the same And that you don't think my feelings are lame ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is nice  I really liked the beginning:"You are the one My dating life is done" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Nikki~ Good one...Sounds like you found the love of your life... You are the one I trust I know this can't just be lust Good thoughts (or feelings)...Thanks for sharing... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey! Great job on this. I don't think he'll think your feelings are lame!! Good luck with this guy. Oh yeh, I love your signature. ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well lemme just take the time to say that if feelings in general were lame....then existance in itself would be lame. OH well..but great poem!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Happy for ya. Just don't give it your all right away. still be careful about your feelings. hope i don't offend you. it's just that i thought the same thing and i got used. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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