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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
sometimes i look at my life and find it very unsettling, or maybe just unsettled. i've been so many places and have too many homes, or maybe i'm homeless |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how you made this short, it makes it seem more dramatic. Well done (and sorry if you relly feel this way)! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very short, but sweet all the more. great job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Maybe its just that all these places you are at dont feel like home to you... This was very good...Thanks for sharing it!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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