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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
-=Thing=- 'weakling!' they called him, 'you're worthless' they said. he simply smiled and turned, as he slowly said: 'by my standards you are no more' -Morouxshi San San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this is cool san, i like this. A little tushé on the "weaklings" part. Good job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very wise words, nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
nice poem, kind of a surprising ending, I like it a lot |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
good attitude towards this subject, great words jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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