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These Emoceans (The 6th Round)
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These Emoceans (The 6th Round) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: the title basically states OCEANS of EMOTIONS...get it? Emoceans?.....ok so yea....enjoy! These Emoceans: Run down beauty set your heart on fire. Trickling water on Mr. Lonely Wire. Bankrupt soul on a world wind axis. It's all we've ever loved, It's all I've ever missed. Sadness lurking within concrete form. A weeping willow has been born. Suicidal maniac plotting his plan. Crying is the only way to become a man. Mother Goose story burns for eternity. The will of love and fantasiac fantasy. A bitter action runs over my soul. The only wish is wishing to be whole.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
wow!!! u already know what i think about this poem its beautiful its very good keep writing bye |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
i love the title babe *L*  great poem is good to see how you are writing now |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i love how you combine the memories of most of our pasts (Mother Goose) and turn it into a kinda turning point in the eternity of the problem you portray. completeness, the ultimate hope... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
wow, great poem. you're already up to your 6th batch? muy bien echo one question, do you ever write anything happy? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the title a lot too, it's creative. The whole poem is well done! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You are really creative Dopey!!!At first I thought this guy doesnt know how to spell...But then I remembered you do know how...LOL Keep it up!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Happy poems? Sure Jose, i write them a bit. But my main topics are about LOVE, LOVES LOSS, SOCIETY, and HUMUROUS...... i might get a weird one in there sometimes that has nothing to do with my usual....but oh well. Thanks all for liking it! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
C O O L jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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