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jytree
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0 posted 2000-10-13 11:54 AM


Here I stand holding the torch,
Once again I make my heart a fort,

Because I strong man hideing his heart has no fears,
And Just for that this man sheds no tears,

So here I go,
But man does it blow,

I hate the fact that all I try to do,
Ends up failing so all I am left with is a boho.

I can't forget The women that have made me strong,
So because Of them I will do no wrong,

Endless times for these rymes,
But not for mine,

For when it is all said and done,
My heart will carry the torch searching fro that one.



early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

Poems are F.U.B.U
( for us by us.)----ME


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1 posted 2000-10-13 03:09 PM



  Hey! This was terrific. Great job on this super piece!! Happy writing!

    ~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

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2 posted 2000-10-13 04:04 PM


Hey, interesting thoughts, I like this

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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3 posted 2000-10-13 06:29 PM


Hey great job bud!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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