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Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-10-12 07:24 PM

-=3rd Person Introspect=-

And then you sit there,
looking desperate and down...

'Where did it all go wrong'
i thought
but the answer i had,
and i mourn.
'What can i do now?'
again i knew the answer.
nothing seems to go well.
Its like this 'jeopardy' from hell
where i have all the answers
but i dont like them
answering my doubts.

And then you sit there,
fighting a war with yourself...

I study the ways of people
i sit and analyse as they walk by.
Aristotle, did he go through this?
did he feel as he was not his?
what was Socrates' advice?
was the margin of error right?
a negative slopes! imaginary numbers!
OUT! OUT! as we were! as we were!
I WANT BACK ON MY LIFE!!

And then you sit there,
draining your soul into paper...

-Morouxshi San
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San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

[This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 10-12-2000).]

sweetypie5
Member

since 2000-10-06

Posts 97
MWC,OK,USA

1 posted 2000-10-12 07:41 PM

Okay wow this is deep! You are a really emotional writer! You write from the heart! Keep up the good work! Come reply to my poems! Like I said great poem!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-12 09:34 PM

and so i sit here.......writing this. Draining my thoughts onto this screen. San you know i liked......didn't think you'd write something about me ever. I'm touched....almost cried hehe. BUt no seriously, i liked it a lot. I forgot i read this before in class but i didn't know it was about me. how seet of you *kisses your hand*......erm....ok no

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-12 10:20 PM

well dope, im like that sometimes.

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-10-13 03:20 PM

This is such a good poem. I love how it is written, you did a great job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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