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sweetypie5
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0 posted 2000-10-12 05:47 PM


Dear Future Boyfriend,
Wherever you are
But there are somethings
That you should know
I'm not tall and I don't have great legs
I'm not perfect as no girl is
I'm not skinny but I'm not fat
I really don't care much about that
I have long hair and big brown eyes
So I shouldn't be easy to see in a crowd
But that will make a our relationship better
I don't have straight teeth
But I will soon
I don't care what you look like
As long as you care
And promise you'll always be there
Don't be afraid to cry in front of me
Because I will cry in front of you No Doubt
Please don't break my heart
Because I won't break yours
You will see girls prettier than me
But I won't be jealous
Because I know you are mine
So future boufriend
Wherever you are
I hope to see you soon
And begin our long relationship

    Love,
Your Future Girlfriend


I live in the present but yearn for the past...
yet the future is so very near

© Copyright 2000 Stephanie Walker - All Rights Reserved
sweetypie5
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1 posted 2000-10-12 07:38 PM


Hey ppl reply to my poem! K???


I live in the present but yearn for the past...
yet the future is so very near

sweetstuff101
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2 posted 2000-10-12 07:53 PM


great poem, steph!! I know what your writing about!! nice work, keep it up!!!

Luv Always,
  Priscilla< !signature-->

~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~



[This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-12-2000).]

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3 posted 2000-10-12 09:34 PM


Hey! Very cool poem, I liked it a lot! It's nice to hear that your not materialistic like most girls...caring about fancy cars, sick packs and that GQ smile. When it comes down to it, personality rules all. Everyone is beautiful in their own way and i'm shur with the type of attitude you have...an excellent one..you'll get the best BF (future BF) out there for you! Good luck on finding Mr.Right!!!
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4 posted 2000-10-12 09:38 PM


Hehehe i thought this poem was immensely cute. I loved the ending "from your future girlfriend"......i loved that!
Anyway.......personality does rule....so good luck gal!



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5 posted 2000-10-13 02:48 PM


I liked this, it's very nice.  Hope you find a great boyfriend soon!

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6 posted 2000-10-13 03:17 PM


This is a wonderful piece. It's good to let a guy know what you want!  
This was very well written. Keep up the great work!

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