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The Love From Your Heart!
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The Love From Your Heart! |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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The Love from your heart is like the wind beneath a birds wings, The Love from your heart makes it seem like a dream, The Love you show me each and every day just makes me wish it will never go away, You seem to suddenly fade away outta my life, You just seemed like you didnt want me ne more, Dont worry I will dance with you upon this floor, After one dance you will never want to leave, No its not that im a good dancer, You'll just realize its me who you wanna be with, No you dont like that other guy, Yeah sure he's getting his boogy on, Boogy means nothing to me who knows he might treat you like a big meanie In the end im the friend, the lover, the one who cares, In the end The Love From Your Heart is mine, You realize im to precious for you to walk out on me now, You finally realized the person you love. "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Hey, great poem... I hope it's real 'cause I'm happy for you if it is. I'm sorry but I'm having some problems and I really don't know what to say. Well, great poem. Bye, your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem dude, happy for you. i hope Caz is ok though. anyway good job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Branden, the way you wrote this is really good. So, she did realize that she loves you? That's cool. Great writing  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Branden~ This was really good...And Im sorry that it took me so long to reply to it...I have been really busy lately and now Im back!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey thank you all for replying to this poem but i dont know when i wrote this lol so thank you all once again and dont worry about it Erin at least u did reply "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, I loved the poem. It was great I hope to read more. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Never say 'I Love You' unless you mean it" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
great write my friend...just hope she does realize how much she means too you. Did she? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Acire, hey there yes she did realize and im very greatfull for that cuz this is like a girl that i feel i cant live without u know theres only a few ppl in the world that can make someone else feel that way well gotta jett cuz school is calling me "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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