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Teen Poetry #3

Life is like a dance

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2000-10-12 03:56 PM

Life is like a dance,
Much like romance,
Yo have fun you spin you play,
And thats all ok.

But whats happens when the music stops,
Do we run and hide like some do with cops,
Or do we stand around with our fingers up our noses much like a fart,
Maybe just maybe we can do something which is pure art,
We can lead the dance with the music in our hearts.

early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

but socially dead.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-10-12 04:41 PM

I like the message behind this one, great job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

2 posted 2000-10-12 05:37 PM

thanks lakewalker I was hoping someone would see it.

early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

but socially dead.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-12 09:47 PM

much like a fart eh?......ok im sorry but i couldnt help but laugh when i read the line.
But the message is good!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-10-12 09:51 PM

music makes the people come together!
-madonna

nice message...

the day the music died...
-madonnas cover of American Pie

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San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

[This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 10-12-2000).]

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

5 posted 2000-10-13 09:37 AM

Sorry about the fart part!
But I couldn't think of anything else I just pulled this one out of my head so I glad you got a laugh dopey and thanks eveybody else

early to rise,
early to bed,
make a man healthy,
But socially dead-Dot animantics.

but socially dead.

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