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sweetstuff101
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0 posted 2000-10-10 04:26 PM



Dear Boy,

I can’t take this pain any longer
To get on with my life, I will have to be stronger
It’s not your fault you don’t feel the same way
But I was hoping you could some day
But that day isn’t coming, this I know
So I’m moving on, I’m letting go
It won’t be easy, but I’ve done it before
But each time, it only seems to hurt more
I now know why it’s called heart ache
Because right now, it feels like my heart really is about to break
All this pain and fear I feel inside
I know I will have to try to hide
Only time can heal my pain
Some day I will love again
But right now all I can do is cry
Well that’s it for now, so good-bye.
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~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~



[This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-10-2000).]

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Acies
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1 posted 2000-10-10 05:00 PM


You have this gift on writing your emotions.  Seems like all your poems are just really dug from within and expressed with such emotion.  keep your head up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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2 posted 2000-10-10 05:28 PM


This is great and i simply love the ending. Great job!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


curlygurly
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3 posted 2000-10-10 06:25 PM


WOW i can totally relate! this was a great poem and heartache sucks but eventually it passes. but it's the long term effects that build up.  
Curlz


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enrique iglesias


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4 posted 2000-10-10 06:47 PM


Hey! Great poem...I too can relate to this poem. Sometimes its hard to let go of something that you truely love but it all works out in the end. Good job!
Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-10-11 02:16 PM


This is so good!  It's very well expressed as acire said.  Keep writing

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Monica Ash
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6 posted 2000-10-11 04:54 PM


This is a GREAT Poem I too sometimes feel like this have you told this boy yet???? When i told the boy it made me feel better,but check out my 2 new poems Loving Willy and Remembering the night we ment and tell me what you tink!!!!!Please.
                     Monica

Monica Ash
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7 posted 2000-10-11 04:55 PM


This is a GREAT Poem I too sometimes feel like this have you told this boy yet???? When i told the boy it made me feel better,but check out my 2 new poems Loving Willy and Remembering the night we ment and tell me what you tink!!!!!Please.
                     Monica

Erin
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8 posted 2000-10-12 02:18 AM


Sweetstuff~
Good one!!!I really liked this one...Really creative...Hope to see more like this!!!


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

sweetypie5
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9 posted 2000-10-12 05:51 PM


Wow That was deep! Gosh I know hat you are going through cuz you've told me all about it!!!! I'm your best friend in case you haven't relized!!! I love your poems! Keep writing!


I live in the present but yearn for the past...
yet the future is so very near

sweetstuff101
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10 posted 2000-10-12 07:20 PM


yes, Steph, I did know you are my best friend lol. I know you know, b/c we are ALWAYS complaining about our problems!!< !signature-->

~*~YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt,  2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt.~*~





[This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-12-2000).]

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