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sherm
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0 posted 2000-10-09 06:33 PM


I CAME to the fight
and took my place upon the battle field
I SAW the odds against me
but not once did i yield
I CONQUERED my fears
and my enemy's fate was sealed


Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not

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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-10-09 08:06 PM


Wow, this is cool.  I like how you used an old saying in your poem, it's creative.  Awesome writing
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-10-09 09:08 PM


Excellent Sherm! What a clever and creative piece ... you certainly came, and posted, and conquered! I really enjoyed this ... well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2000-10-09 09:15 PM



  Great work!! Very nice way of portraying this concept. Kudos to you!!

   ~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

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4 posted 2000-10-10 02:53 PM


Great job, i liked this a lot.

the simplicity of the poem was met up with some deep meaning within it all. I liked this a lot.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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