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~*Meghan*~
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0 posted 2000-10-09 03:41 PM


I met you,
and something inside me smiled.
I got to know you,
and something inside my heart grew.
I learned to love you,
and my whole life changed.

I learned to care about you,
and you showed your love for me.
I got to trust you,
and you let me know everything
I met your true self,
and you were always so perfect in my heart.

Now I feel that I never want to let you go~
My heart would never be whole.
You are now apart of my soul.

We have always been friends~
and I've always wanted to be more.
Finally you let that happen, you opend that door.

Together I hope we always are! You're always in my heart. We are never far from each other! I love you.

~*Meghan*~

"To be your friend was all I ever wanted;to be your lover was all I ever dreamed."
~Valerie Lombardo



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1 posted 2000-10-09 03:50 PM


I'm glad that you finally got what you wanted! I have a similar situation...about caring that much about a best friend of mine but being anything more is only a dream right now...not a reality. Its so great that you found someone like him to be with. I hope everything works out great for you. Great poem!
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2 posted 2000-10-09 07:16 PM


Oh! How I know how this is! Only you won!! You got him, girl. I hope it lasts. Nice writing.
Jenn


"He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-10-09 08:14 PM


This was a sweet poem, it really let your feelings show.  Great job   
Alwye
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In the space between moments
4 posted 2000-10-09 10:07 PM


This is very sweet, nice sentiments!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
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State of Despair
5 posted 2000-10-09 10:09 PM


this brought a smile to my mouth, this is all i ever want to be to a girl

jeremy r

"I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering,
I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection."
~DMX~ "Prayer III"

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~
6 posted 2000-10-10 01:27 AM


Falling in love with that person you want to fall in love with is the best...I fell in love with my best friend and now I love him with all my heart and soul...You got what you wanted just make sure you dont lose it!!!Keep up the good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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7 posted 2000-10-10 02:59 PM


Glad to hear you're all happy. Being happy is the best and i'm happy for you. Good job! and nice poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


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