navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » no worries
Teen Poetry #3
Post A Reply Post New Topic no worries Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
kutzly
Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17
ohio

0 posted 2000-10-08 06:30 PM


As time goes by our love will grow-
For some reason for this i know-
In due time we will meet-
Kid of fulfilling both our dreams-
And I wont want to leave for you i will miss-
So i will stay locked to your lips-
As i gaze in to the sky-
I know soon that we will see eye to eye-


© Copyright 2000 M - All Rights Reserved
Acies
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
1 posted 2000-10-08 06:39 PM


Once again you have amazed me with your poem.  I can see that you truely are talented.  Such little words that when put together, can mean so much.  And at the same time express so much emotion.  Thanks so much for sharing this peom  

"As i gaze in to the sky-
I know soon that we will see eye to eye-"

Keep up the good work, and keep sharing
        

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


kutzly
Junior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 17
ohio
2 posted 2000-10-08 06:42 PM


thanks for replying hope to get more soon
Dopey Dope
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
3 posted 2000-10-08 06:52 PM


Well hey, like i said before.......you write great and good luck!




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.


Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-10-09 12:55 PM


I like this a lot, it's very well written
Acies
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
5 posted 2000-10-09 09:33 PM


just a friendly bump   ~*BUMP*~

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #3 » no worries

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary