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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Long Day I awoke at 3 p.m. Fearfully, I crept from the safety of my bed to face inevitability. Honestly, I wonder why I leave that place... my slumber, my security. Without fail, I found false hope in Saturday. Just another time to drift. I drifted aimlessly about the world, hoping to share my gift. Without fail, the world was dry of love for me. Love...my gift to share with thee. Does the world not need my company. That's just how it seems to be. Now, I retreat from this battle with nothing left to say except that I awoke at 3 p.m., yet still had such a damn long day. Jeremy D. Halstead 10-8-00 Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great expression Jeremy! Some days the monotony can seem to last forever ... I enjoyed your thoughts and presentation in this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The ending of this seemed perfect. The whole thing is very well written, I enjoyed reading it. I hate having these sort of days though. |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremy, days such as these a re the ones that need to be taken and put in confinement! I know this feeling all too well my friend. All I can say is look at this day that you wrote about and think about how the next will be substantially better! Sorry I didn't talk to you when you called. Anymore when I'm sleeping it's impossible for me to wake and have a meaningful convo!  Besides that, 2 hours before you called, I stumbled my way into the door and passed out on the kitchen floor...only to awake an hour later very uncomfortable and managed somehow to make it to my bed. So me thinks, that when you called I was still half assed drunk! anyways, nice poem you have here my dear! Talk at ya soon! Love Always ~*~Jess~*~ ~*~Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference...~*~ |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
hey babe! i haven't been in passions in a while, but once again you've written a beautiful poem, keep of the great work! i'm going to try to get around to replying to as many as i can! love Danielle "I Told Him I Loved Him and the feelings were mutual...He Loved Himself too." |
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X_me_X Junior Member
since 2000-08-18
Posts 37 |
wow, this wus a great poem its exactly how i felt at one point. when purpose of life, length of hours, length of days is jus pointless. i think everyone goes thru a phase like that in life, hope it ges betta for ya latez ~All is forgiven but NEVER forgotten~ |
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