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Alas, the Final Scapegoat!
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Alas, the Final Scapegoat! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Alas, the Final Scapegoat: Is this not a meaningful life? A dripple of water, a beam of light. So little in quantity, Yet at the right moment So praised as a heavenly gift. And death? Where oft blows winds of stillness. The insidious frost locked in place. A lonely setting to fixate upon, And it awaits us all. To ere angels devine. Smiling in laconic bliss. Oh site of sites! And life, sweet life! May it fade within thine eyes. Lo the hypocritical axis of concrete phases! Tis all that beacons, and commands. We lay within our stand still time. Death being the last scapegoat, And I being the last of me!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
wow this poem was quite astonishing! i have no clue where you come up with this stuff but you do somehow and it's very good!  Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful queries on life Javier! Searching and pondering the depth of thoughts from meaning of life ... to end. I really enjoyed your wording in this piece, very well done! Best wishes, /Kit PS ... Congratulations on 500 Posts ... that's quite a milestone! [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is written so well Dopey. Where do you come up with these?? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really dope Dopey  kidding aside, i agree with everyone, where do you get all these ideas? You're like a walking thesaurus or something. great job I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Where do I come up with these ideas? Well to be honest, I just have a vivid imagination. I have no idea how some things come to me, but they do. It's as natural as breathing for me.....oh well! Anyway i'm glad you all thought it was good. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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