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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-10-07 10:33 AM

You have such a gentle look,
When your smile lights up your face.
Your one of a kind in every way,
No one else could take your place.
You look at me and I cant help but smile,
I go out of my way to see you before class,
Because to me your worth the while.
My friends dont see how i can like you,
They all call you weird.
"He's not like everyone else", they say
Thats why i'm so glad you appeared.
I look at you and reality shocks me,
Your you,
Nothing less and nothing more.
You dress the way you want,
Though its different from most people's taste.
It doesnt matter to you,
Being like everyone makes life a waste.
I admire you for being unique,
Even though people say your weird.
I cant help but be intruiged by you,
Whenever your near.
So never give in to the "normal crowd",
We are all the same.
You should be the one whose proud,
For never being the same.

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

1 posted 2000-10-07 10:42 AM

Hey great poem xShUgArHiGhx, so you're feeling something for him. Now I'm intrigued too, would you tell me some more about this poem.

It's been raining since you left me.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-07 12:08 PM

This is a cool poem, I like your attitude. in it. Great writing

"You have such a gentle look,
When your smile lights up your face."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-10-09 09:18 PM

You should be proud of yourself for not being sucked into all these steriotyping this world has ultimately created. Great job in writing this poem and keep it up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-10-10 03:02 PM

im glad you like somebody . good poem and good luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

anomaly187
Member

since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

5 posted 2000-10-10 09:39 PM

hey great poem..shows you really like him...good luck in getting some...err getting him...

I can only see through your eyes
This is how i die

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