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xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-10-06 10:44 PM

I sit next to you,
Concentrating on your beautiful eyes.
You have so much love,
But she doesnt realize.
You've given this girl your heart,
She's thrown it in your face.
Your left feeling unloved,
Unwanted,
A complete disgrace.
Please dont think that,
It's far from the truth,
Believe me.
She's not worth your time,
Your heart or this pain.
This is really her loss,
And all your gain.
She's a girl,
The girl you say of your dreams.
Please realize,
She's not what she seems.
She's not careful with your heart,
To her its a toy.
If only i could be the one,
I wipe away your tears.
I calm you from her heart ache,
And when she brings reality to your worst fears.
She is the phantom girl,
The girl who only exists in your mind.
Everything you think she consists of,
Really consists in me.
Please dont let her hurt you anymore,
I'm asking you,
Fall back on me.

Fearless_Angel
Member

since 2000-10-03

Posts 57
Calgary, AB Canada

1 posted 2000-10-06 10:49 PM

WOw! That was a really touching and magical poem. It was great! You have some much talent! I'm so envious. I wish I could write like that! I hope you end up getting who you want because your feelings for them are truthfully strong! Good luck! Keep writing okies...
Lotsa Love,
Angel

Caz
Member

since 2000-09-13

Posts 133
Concepción, Chile

2 posted 2000-10-07 12:27 PM

I totally agree with Angel, what else can I say. Well, I think that this guy is blinded, and if you really think he deserves you, you should open his eyes and lead his way. If he deserves you, he will understand. Good luck, and great poem, bye. Your friend, Caz.

It's been raining since you left me.

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-07 11:17 AM

I say ditto to the others and very well done. This is such a nice poem.

"I'm asking you,
Fall back on me."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-10-07 01:32 PM

Great job on the poem and i look forward to reading more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

5 posted 2000-10-07 02:52 PM

This was a very good poem! I know how it goes when you like someone who has a horrible girlfriend! it sucks and no matter how much you try to tell them that she's bad for him he won't listen!

Curlz

"i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky"
enrique iglesias

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