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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Escape Flying by, All the beautiful things in life. Speeding past, The important things to do. Fleeing fromthe screaming and yelling. Leaving behind, The painful memories. Pushing back, The uncried tears in my eyes. I'm sprinting so fast, Running away, Running for my freedom, Running for my life. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I like this a lot. I think this is one of the best poems I've read today. Some word of advice, don't run from everything. If you run from hurt/pain, how are you gonna know the real meaning of fulfillment? If you run from your past, how can you learn from it? If you run from all the bumps in life, how are you gonna grow stronger? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow..this was great. I loved it. ~Carly Better days are on the way, my friend, just a ways on down the line. I believe that just around the bend, everythings gonna be fine... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I agree, don't just run. This is a good poem, thanks for sharing it!  |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Your poem is great, but I'll give you some advice too. Acire is totally right, if you run from your past, from problems, from darkness, you will never rest, they will catch you. You will feel free for a while, I tried to do this too, but time learnt me that you can't run away. You've got to face them, and fight. Just send me a message if you need me. Bye. It's been raining since you left me. |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Everyone: Thanks for responding to my poem! I really need it to improve! Acire: Thank Q always for your loving advice to pull myself through the hurt and apin! Child of the Stars: Thanks for reading and responding! Lakewalker: I'll try to make your advice happen okies, thank! Caz: I don't know what I'd do without you! You're the best! Thanks for being there and I promise that I'll try to help you too okies? Love ya always! Thank you everyone for everything. I'm really happy I wrote this one cause it's getting published in a book winter 2001 and I'll remember you guys for everything...Love ya all! Lotsa Love, Angel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job!!! How'd you end up getting published?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
the poem is good. it seems like something that might be said by the character Jenny in Forest Gump. She was one to always run away from her problems, and bad situations. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sometimes we all need to run....even if it's just for a little bit. Very emotional and well written piece of work! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Really great poem...I wish I could run away from all my problems...not possible though...a lot of times when you sit and think of the bad stuff you miss the important stuffand even good stuff that happens. You should sit back and enjoy life (although I know sometimes it's hard to..) it's all good though...just my little input because I don't wanna say what everybody else says....I liked it... Dark Star |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I really like your poem. I'm not going to preach at you though, because everyone else did too much of that already. Congrats on you publishment, or whatever the word is. *~Meredith*~ I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey everyone: Thanks for responding! If any of you wanna talk, you can either gimme an "uh-oh" at 64399384 (Fearless_Angel) or send meeh an e-mail at Fearless_Angel@hotmail.com okies? Thanks for all your help and praising! Love you all! Lotsa Love, Angel (^_~) |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was pretty cool sometimes running is okayjeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I Got a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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em New Member
since 2000-10-15
Posts 2 |
I really luved this poem. It sounds like you have had alot of hard times in your life- prob alot more than me. But from someone who is just starting to learn about poetry- be happy you have a way to express yourself. It is a gift i wish evryone could have...  |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey everyone: Thanks for coming by! Em...I wish that too sumtimes! O.K. I need everyone's help. I have a friend who's going through come pretty hard times right now and needs help. Should I write him a poem? Should I give him this one? I'm really confused, worried and sad! Please help me, ok? (~_~) Thanks... Lotsa Love, Angel |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Please read everyone!!! Thanks, I really appreciate it! Lotsa Love, Angel |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Angel~ I dont think that I ever read a poem by someone else that said so much about my life as theirs...Thanks for sharing this piece... And about your friend just be there for them...It matters alot more... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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