»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
A dream Unattainable
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
A dream Unattainable |
|
Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
|
I see you there, as my friend. How long has it been since we last talked? I miss you. You've come back around again, and I'm loving every second. I thought it was not you I envisioned for me. You, just a guy, a guy to talk to. I thought you a buddy, chum, or pal, Never saw you as the other half to my heart, The warmth I've always somehow lacked. Now you're here, you're all I want. I cannot comprehend the sparks that fly when you do touch me. When you hug me, it fits so perfectly, we mesh so well. I cannot dare to ask, do you feel for me, as I do for you? One of those wierd teenage crush poems...  |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I don't see this as a "weird teenage crush poem" at all. You actually did a good job writing you feelings Tell him how you feel, if not at least give him a clue, show him how you feel at least..he'll eventually realize your feelings towards him. Coming from a guy, when the girl makes the first move helps a lot too it takes of some of the pressure from the guy good luckI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
||
|
Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I have these issues. Number one with rejection. I guess that one's normal.Other than that, I always choose the wrong guys, and sometimes I decide too late that what I thought I wanted, I really didn't. Then someone winds up hurt.... if for some reason, we hooked up... I'd be so afraid to hurt him. I'm a mess. !!! Jenn< !signature--> "He's mastered the art, of looking sincere, his eyes have a way, of making you stay, don't look in the mirror"- Chely Wright [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-06-2000).] |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this, it tells your emotions so well. Nice writing |
||
xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem is great! It really explains how you realized how much you felt for this guy whose been right in front of you for so long but you were to blinded by his friendship to see anything more. I loved it! "Never saw you as the other half to my heart, The warmth I've always somehow lacked." |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
