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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-10-06 03:54 PM


I just think its funny,
You hurt me
To go to another,
That already hurt you.
Now she’s hurt you again,
But I’ve found a good man.
I can’t help but laugh,
When I think of tears,
That you must be crying.
Life is like a circle,
You hurt someone
To go to another,
That “other” person
Will end up hurting you.




If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-10-06 07:45 PM


This one had that mean sort of attitude, but it sounded good.  Did that make sense?  Anyway, I like it   
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2 posted 2000-10-06 07:55 PM


I know how much anger/hate we could have for the person who caused us so much pain.  But in the end, we must learn to forgive for that makes us a better person.  Just having that hate in us all this time just stoops us down to the same level as the other person.  And true, "What goes around, comes around". keep up the good work Tamma...keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
3 posted 2000-10-07 10:19 AM


i know it sounded mean, but that was just what i was feeling at the time, but ya know what? im happier without him, because of him, i met Justin, and when he broke up with me, Justin came to my rescue, and well, everything worked out the way it should have  

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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